LastPaladin

Two things I've posted and inserted a new sub plot that will eventually introduce Harry's contact it's nothing much just a phone conversation he ignores and hangs up. And also ...

Harry Raine: - Team Charlie - On the Train W/Hayley, Sam Cook, Nyx, Winter, and Maya. Well it was certainly obvious people trusted him less than others around here, but ...

Bruno – Common Room Pushing the door near off his hinges he grinned seeing many of the younger groupies and bands shiver. Aiming for the sofa he threw himself down, ...

Melodies of memories echoing, sighing through the breeze, scores of tomorrows that finally came. A welcome interlude to a depressing chapter far from grace. Rank up the orchestra, bring on ...

In no order particular. Artermis Fowl - Eoin Colfer: It bored me insanely Deltora - Jane Rodda: Can't believe thought she was good at one point. Treasure - Clive Cussler: ...

11, I would have done 12 but was distracted again lmao.

Greetings I'm LastPaladin and sorry to say but this is angst and has no real emotion it tries to have raw unfettered emotion but it comes across rather as 'emo' ...

Greetings Creative I'm LastPaladin and this piece is best I've seen all day, not for the complexity but for the simple nature and how we can all relate to it. ...

Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I'm two minds about this poem you begin rather blandly with some nice wording, and okay imagery but then like here: so we look through the ...

Eight, but then a very good 'friend' came on msn and chatted to hehe. But managed eight so I ain't lazy :P. Oh we've more time I'm back baby! XD ...

Hello I'm LastPaladin and I'll be your reviewer, sadly this piece came across as many do, cliche and nothing new is added it's similar story heard so many times and ...

Hi, I'm LastPaladin and I've read this before but the points being made were exactly my thoughts, so thought best not go on. But Nate called me out, so I ...

Bruno - Hallway “Nothing.” He growled at Kerli. Little-Miss-I’m-So-Perfect-And-Nice, he hated brats, he hated teens and most especially he loathed Jessica, if he had her way with her, he’d mak

Eight. Anyone who does less than me is the laziest McLazy on Lazy street. You're on! I only need two more reviews, I shall go for 15 today and beat ...

I LastPaladin agree with the others this is sloppy and comes across as largely and mainly contrived and forced, it tries to sound beautiful but the images 'NEED TO MAKE ...