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Re: Autumnal Night
Wow, just wow, I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer and just wow! It's not often I'm so impressed with pieces on here, most of the time I enjoy ...
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: A Paladin's Acts of Kindness - My Review Thread (Open)
Will you review this? Done! Anymore reviews people want me to do? Remember I'll only do poems and will give you a good thorough review :).
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: Jealousy of the Sand
Hello I'm LastPaladin and with this piece I felt a mixed bag on one end I loved the personification of the main characters, but on the other hand I felt ...
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: Attention
Hello I'm LastPaladin and I shall reviewing this piece. My opinion from what I could stand to read was this was Angst, not even constructive, or well written just a ...
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: Two Sides of the Road
Hello Cheesy I'm LastPaladin and I shall review this piece, I'll first say I was glad chose to read this as it suprised me, but unfortunately, I feel you didn't ...
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: Match Maker
Sol and TheNewHero XD He is a boy. Kylorrac and Kylan (Both are incredibly smart) Kylorrac and Jagged Scar and Lethero (Because :P) I'm done for now :P.
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: Grown Up Games
After a few reads of this Vamprye I finally got just of it. But you don't want understanding you want a good review, I shall begin now. Okay to begin ...
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: Caption The Pic Above You
I got this idea from another site while browsing on the web. Basically you post a picture and the person who posts next, captions the picture and they then post ...
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: Appeasement
There certain factors come into play when talking about this. The main is this is appeasement cowardly action or a means to prevent war. The debate here is whether it's ...
Nov 23, 2010 -
Re: Common Cliches?
Heroes that have some wise old person who does next to nothing except try to sound enigmatic and mysterious. Another one is names that are impossible to pronounce, characters names ...
Nov 23, 2010 -
Re: Sand is (1st and 2nd drafts included)
I would only like reviews on the main / finished piece, please. And there's a total of 10 drafts, I just wanted to post the beginning bones of this. ___ ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: EvERlaSTinG
Let me begin by saying Doom when people spend time to review a piece, you shouldn't be condescending, especially as this piece is very ambigious and if someone doesn't understand ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: Report A Site Bug
... "View more smilies". This link no longer works for me. Upon clicking it, a new window will open, showing all the little smilies in their fun. Before, I could ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: Match Maker
Andes and Lava
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: Match Maker
Raz and Solv :P
Nov 22, 2010
