LastPaladin

Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer, what caught my eye about this piece was the title, now I'm sad to say huge let down on what would ...

Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer, this piece wasn't awful it had some great lines, but what it really failed at what conveying certain idea and dropping ...

Hello as request Draax I shall review this, I'm LastPaladin as you well know. This piece seems more like half done, half finished or incomplete, it doesn't seem at all ...

Where to begin, where to begin, I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer and this piece here is hard to review, it doesn't flow, doesn't seem to have any ...

How do you do I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer, this poem come across to me as all state never explain see your poem falls into the category ...

Isha, Isha, Isha, man am I impressed, this is just amazing, the words chosen, the metaphors and language techniques conveyed in this single piece is purely astounding, it's much like ...

Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer for tonight, like many pointed out I love the dualism of it, it makes it seem innocent, like a young kid ...

Greetings I'm LastPaladin and my first quick look of this piece shows it's a suicide poem, I'm not very fond of them, but unlike many others this doesn't come across ...

Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer, this piece comes across as the generic mess of cliches and tired ideas, it tries to be poetical with some lines, ...

Hello I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer right off the bat I shall say this. This is bad. Honestly it's 'woe is me' moan moan poetry, contrived, cliché ...

Okay, I'm LastPaladin and as you don't want a review I shall guess. Basically the Fortune Teller confounds the person their and while they're concentrating on the ball the monkey ...

Hello I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer. This poem had some good but more bad, to explain it seems like it more than one poem, and seems extremely ...

Okay, I'm LastPaladin and found this when looking for more to reviews, it had no comments so felt doubly obliged to. I took you advice and read through it, I ...

Hello I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer, this piece is all tell and never really show, you go on and on but never really establish any interest for ...

I'm a loss of what to say about this, you certain capture the rawness and emotion of what you convey, but my opinion is you can capture rawness in poetry ...