LastPaladin

Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I felt much like Snoink this piece hits a little too close to home, the lien about jack is sweet, and when reading bean lines I ...

Greetings Blackbird, I have to say your poetry is a delight to read, it's grabs you in, is suitably subtle and you really get a chance to admire the terrific ...

First off going to say great use of metaphor, the name of your love worked very well with this. And now I shall say hello, I'm LastPaladin, you may have ...

Hi! So I posted in the "I'm Back" thread, but since I have a new username and it's been 4 years since I last posted using my old username, I ...

Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer, this piece here, comes across to me as a replica of many of the same you see elsewhere, perhaps I'm wrong ...

Greetings Nightshade I shall be your reviewer and my name is LastPaladin what struck me about this poem was it seemed like a musing but much like a musing it ...

I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer, this piece struck as something trying to be deep but missing the mark as even though it has the imagery it doesn't ...

Ah Jagged what we have here is a very interesting piece, interesting how you ask? Well it seems to be about a deadly obsession, something loilita like, the kind the ...

Hello, I shall be your reviewer for today, I'm of course LastPaladin. As I read this poem a thought occurs to me, it's not exactly that much a cliche, but ...

Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer for today, I shall examine this poem with great scrutiny and decide whether it can stand up to that. I'll take ...

I'm posting this here only because it's reviewer Sunday tomorrow, and certain people feel I'm to harsh, well go mad on this :). ****** Simple defiance was all it was, ...

Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall reviewing this rather unique piece, I say unique but alas unique doesn't always equal good, but it can if you're willing to listen take ...

Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer, it's my opinion of this poem is not only did it kick us out not allowing any imagery to capture, it ...

It's rare for me to be impressed, but I LastPaladin have to say I am impressed and even though your first line used from another poem, you manage to keep ...

Here I am as requested, LastPaladin. I shall say right off the bat, this piece doesn't seem so bad. It seems to have some great enveloping imagery, some great lines ...