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  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Speculation: F58 part 2

    The story and concept are interesting. You kept up the level of suspense throughout. The pacing was well done. Also the mystery on whether Jackie was even human or a ...

    Aug 10, 2009
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Just wanted to know what you think.

    The stale air of the room was as still as its owner. (There were two people in the room so at the ending at least specify who owned the room) ...

    Aug 7, 2009


Oh, Brightlord Tumul! How unexpected it is to see you standing there! I didn't mean to insult your stupidity. Really, it's quite spectacular and worthy of much praise.
— Wit (The Way of Kings by Brandon Sanderson)