Lampshade

This is pretty good Magic. I think that I do agree with Kylan, though, as the beginning needs a tad more action. PLEASE!! continue to write on this. It is ...

This story, I must admit, is a tad depressing. If you intend to write a book or even a short story like this you should do extensive research first. I ...

Nice job, it seems to be pretty good to me. Just make sure you write some more in it so we can fully understand it because right now it is ...

Okay I made some changes thanks for the advice everyone. Sorry I couldn't use your suggestion Snoink but it would completely throw the story off. My italics also wouldn't work?! ...

Thanks Imp for replying I really appreciated your comments I'll change them ASAP.

Nice job. I really like how you had the twist at the end of the story. As Gyrfalcon pointed out you do have some grammar mistakes but overall I thought ...

THE STORY Approximately three days ago a book was published by an author that has been considered dead for a long time. The man Greg Thron was assassinated five years ...

Good job this is a pretty well written piece. I found myself intrigued by it. However you either need to write more on this to explain it or need to ...

Nice job!!! I really liked your writing it drew me in and make me think at the end. I especially liked your last line as it was awesome!

Very good job Dynamo this is probably you're best piece yet. I'm sad you have to quit posting this story but I understand your reasons. For once I really don't ...

Good job Dynamo a very nice piece of writing I like how you got into the action as It caught me up in it and kept me hooked. However I ...

Good job once again Dynamo you 're story is very good. However as usual I have some comments. You never told us what people think of Darc at this point ...

Please comment on this story as almost nobody on TSR commented about it!!!

Okay this is my first story ever so its probably going to be pretty bad but I’m going to try my best. Prologue, The room was dark and musty. Rats ...

Good job Dynamo nice story. I enjoyed this read a lot and have few things to comment about in fact I have only one thing that I think could be ...