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Hola:) I must say, this was a pleasure to read. It was very smoothly written and conveyed the point nicely. I like your wording for the most part, and how ...

Well done! The story flows very nicely, and does keep the reader well informed. Judging by my History class last year, all of it is historically accurate. I like the ...

I wrote this for a contest, to write about an emotion- I chose excitement. I really don't think it fits in General Fiction Short Stories, but I'll give it a ...

That was beautiful, and I admire your choice to write in Italian. It's a much more musical language than English. What a picture you paint! It changes in my mind, ...

I like this. It's very much my style. The way you wrote it so objectively, with... how to say- unfeeling? comments along the way gave the story a backbone and ...

Hullo! First off, I'll just say that I do so love how flighty this poem feels, since you use a lovely mix of relatively unrelated nouns in it. It adds ...

I like your technique. I might just steal the hair shading skills from you:) Just one suggestion: the nose. I wish you shaded it so it stuck out a bit ...

This poem is beautiful. I love how you expressed sadness in this poem. You used imagery really well throughout, and your word choices were super wise. I did not get ...

Hullo! Like pretty much everyone on this topic, I'm new. I joined about an hour ago, and I have 2 topics so far. This place seems boppin.

Wow. One of the deepest poems I've read in a while. First off, thank you for giving us a look at life inside the darker reaches of the mind, where ...

*EDIT: Forgot to mention this before, but this was for a really specific contest, which is why it's abnormally short. Necessity is the mother of invention. Her other children include ...

Hello:) This is a great piece. I like the objective view, which is really rare in poetry. Great idea, too. Feelings are fickle things, and you seem to have worded ...

I like it. It has a pretty sound and a nice ring to it. Is the 'You" in the first stanza the same as "she" in the others? For the ...

Fantastic! I love the creative style and your decision to write it in a dialogue. It keeps the poem moving effectively and adds a different, more personal dimension. The mood ...

Based on a family legend of mine. Changes? Criticisms? Roaring waves told the tale of the deep, O’er the grave where sailors sleep. The Swede’s fear showed; sweat wet his ...