LadyRaRa

"BRYLEIGH NICOLE! ARE YOU AWAKE YET?" I woke with a start to Aunt Jersey yelling from the base of the stares. I glanced at the Hello Kitty clock on my ...

Hiya!! I liked this a lot! I loved the end when the music was playing. It needed more emotion though, thats the only thing that could have made it better, ...

Hiya!! Great beginning! It left me with questions and wanting more. But remember to check your spelling and grammer. Your off to a great start! keep writing!!

THEY SAY THAT YOU NEVER TRUELY LIVE UNTIL YOU HAVE FOUND SOMETHING TO DIE FOR. My name is Bryleigh Nicole Davis, and I lived for the something that could kill ...