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Re: No. 14
[quote="dregymayfield"]I guess the other 21 people before me are lamewads who can't leave a post. God, that pisses me off when we submit our work and all these people read ...
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: Home by emmaline49
Y ou're a little boy in the rain when you look at me and deep in your eyes I find a home. Y ou're a little boy in the sun ...
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: The Forbidden Sea
Ohh! I get it now! This poem is about mermaids and stuff! Well, you've certainly put things inn perspective! When I read this, I definitely don't imagine Ariel! Truly amazing! ...
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: The Seven Bloodbaths
Wow! A poem about vampires! Who'd a thought? Anyway, I liked it. the ending was dramatic, but hey -this is dramatic poetry, non?
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: The Other Side
I have too many important plans That just Don’t involve you A heartbeat song A heartbeat gone I especially like the last stanza, even though it is only two lines. ...
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: Mirror, Mirror On The Wall
Woohoo! Another excellent poem! I do NOT know how you think of all these stuff! You must be some sort of genius! I like the style in which you write ...
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: Two Hypocrites
Whoa O_e that was a LOT. I'm not sure I quite understood everything, but I can see how you came up with the title, I guess... Good job, otherwise!
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: My Fallen Star
Oh, this poem was so sweet! It made me tear up at the end! Excellent job, keep it up!
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: Narcissistic Little Whore
WHOA! I LOVE this! At first, I was all like, 'why does he keep repeating the same lines?' but this poem is very passionate, and the repetitive lines seem to ...
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: Shout
Excellent poem, but I believe you forgot to change the lines -everything was all a big paragraph, and it was hard to tell where a stanza might end!
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: -Still-
.Wow. That was beautiful! This poem is truly inspiring! I like the words you used, it brought your poem to life. Keep up the great work!
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: The Secret Life of Superheroes
They scrubbed and polished, straightened, mopped; Tidied, neatened, freshened, stopped … … Then dusted, ironed, folded clothes; Watered flowers, goodness knows! But in a moment all was clear, the
Apr 1, 2011 -
Re: What would happen if?
Jasper Alexander (Main personality), Code of Black Jasper sat, waiting. He looked around and waited some more. There was nothing to do. No where to go, no one to talk ...
Apr 1, 2011 -
Re: Losing my wings
Yay! I love this poem! It's so deep and inspiring and stuff!
Apr 1, 2011 -
Re: What would happen if?
Hey, what's the next question?
Apr 1, 2011