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Re: NR 23
Losing your virginity is supposed to be this big thing…I grew up thinking whole heartedly that I would only give mine away to someone I loved, and I thought that ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: Phantasm
[quote="ChimpanzeeMinkey"]I see you, standing there so quietly, like a ghost inside a dream-scape, singing lullabies of hate and misery. Untouchable, you will always be, a figment in the distance, her
May 5, 2011 -
Re: The Tyrannical World
quote="fireflight14"]Walking on the serene streets, I suddenly heard the screaming of the birds, The wind blowing cold, Frightened and scared stands the old. I heard a guttural boom, And a ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: I will hold onto you
Vrs1 As I’m looking down From this high set bridge There’s cars rushing by And a rugged ridge I could jump right now And end my life I could do ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: All Hope Is Gone
Good stuff! I like the chorus, though the first line, "How did we get this far" doesn't seem to really fit in with the rest of the chorus. I can ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: When the Darkness Comes
>>Please keep in mind that I wrote this in 14 minutes for a writing prompt at school. Then read and review! Thanks! When the Darkness Comes When the darkness comes, ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: The Darkest Passion
The hardest battle to win are the ones , when you feel heartless towards your family and freinds. The coldest nights are the ones , when you feel you lost ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Untitled
I break away from the monotony of apathy this moment of eradication of my feelings takes dedication; a hopeless mission to transition to a nation of empathy to dream of ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: What would happen if?
Ah! You forgot to post the next question!!!
Apr 30, 2011 -
Re: What would happen if?
[rubs hands together evilly:] Here we go. Solomon from the Code of Black. "I will serve faithfully," He vowed, kneeling in front of Death's son. Alexander peered down at his ...
Apr 29, 2011 -
Re: What would happen if?
psh... people get shot at all the time in Code of Black... Belle Levefre, the Code of Black. Belle shouted at the others, "I'VE GOT THIS! YOU GUYS JUST RUN!!" ...
Apr 24, 2011 -
Re: I have darkness in my veins.
This is very good! It's easy to understand (unlike SOME poems -ugh) and the grammar was flawless (to me, anyway). Even though I can't really relate to this poem, I'm ...
Apr 11, 2011 -
Re: document 3
Well, this story did not make all that much sense, but maybe I did not start from the beginning. Over all, it was well written and the grammar was very ...
Apr 8, 2011 -
Re: Untitled(for now)
After class I stood outside taking in the gentle breeze as she walked to me her face filled with happiness as she whispered the words I had been longing to ...
Apr 8, 2011 -
Re: Lame Butt Unicorn
Oh if the Unicorn tries to sodomize me again I'm going to cut off his fucking dick and then make him swallow it and cut off his horn and shove ...
Apr 7, 2011