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Hellos! This is TheScratchMan, and I will be reviewing your article today. Things in red font are changes I have made that make sense to ME. I hate what I ...

Lucas, The Code of Black A/N: WARNING: CONTAINS REFERENCES TO SLASH (YAOI). SCROLL DOWN IMMEDIATELY IF YOU DON'T LIKE THAT. Also, the MC, Lucas, is enemies with Jasper Cheetah, Raven's ...

Raven, the Code of Black Raven gulped and opened her mouth. No words came. Her pen was poised to write, and she had a notebook on her lap and her ...

Hi! I think you should use this poem for that scholarship thing you're doing. I'm sure that you've already taken some of the suggestions made in the other comments, but ...

Alright! An excerpt! Red signals changes to be made. I spent the whole night ranting about the horrors I had just witnessed, my voice loud and echoing within the walls ...

Hi, this is TSM, and I'll be your reviewer today! Red font means changes, and bold face are comments. First of all, capitalize 'Thunder and Rain', you title. Thunder claps, ...

Hello, I'll be your reviewer today! First off, as I know nothig of this fiction you are fanfiction-ing for, I will stick to correcting only grammatical errors I see. The ...

>>>This isn't nearly as good as some of my other poems... I don't really like it, but you can decide for yourself... Deaf Why can’t you hear me? Have you ...

Piano Man I am your piano man Here I would either put a semi-colon, or a hypen at the beginning of the next line. I sing and play , but ...

I see you staring at me Trying to figure out what's wrong I know it's always hard to see What keeps me from moving on You don't always know what ...

Has the world come down on me? As I look at the sky with seem. This line makes no sense. And now I write my words earnestly. Each time my ...

So, this is how it ends I suggest putting this thought in italics or quotation marks. , I thought feeling his hands wrap around my throat with more strength. I ...

>>Now this poem is really weird, in my opinion. I hope you get it! Go Away Ghosty Go away, ghosty, I don’t want to see you. Go away ghosty, What ...

>>Obviously, I'm feeling particularly poetic this week... Hope you like this one! Please review! I wrote this poem during math class... :D No Evil No one heard my cry for ...

What is it? What is it, That calls out to us? Can you here it? The quiet call, The quiet call of love. Is it a feeling? Is it a ...