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Re: I want to die on the highest high
I read this amazing fanfiction, written from the point of view of someone insane, and followed by a second part, which from from the view of a different person, also ...
Nov 23, 2011 -
Re: Quoth The Raven
Hm... been reading Edgar Allan Poe recently, huh? I really like how you turned the poem into a story and then added your own twist to it. The way you ...
Nov 23, 2011 -
Re: Five months of my life.
Aw! Very inspirational! Good luck with med school! I hope you can find time to pop in on YWS as much as possible. :)
Nov 23, 2011 -
Re: I say goodbye to the tears staining my reflection.
Fantastic job! Your poem (though I can see it as a song) is pretty well written, and I definitely did not see any typos or spelling/grammar errors. You wrote about ...
Nov 23, 2011 -
Re: What would happen if?
Franky Malloy; Plan A "I've been given the great responsibility..." Franky paused to give his announcement a dramatic effect; "To save the world." A fit of giggles met his words ...
Nov 10, 2011 -
Re: Just in case
Just in case. It’s snowing but I can see the sun. It’s sunny, but I’m freezing. I have to get home before the sun goes down. It doesn’t look like ...
Nov 9, 2011 -
Re: What would happen if?
Alyra West, Sticks and Stones I opened my eyes and didn't see anything. Terror just rushed through me. It was awful, you know? Like sometimes it's so dark, when your ...
Oct 23, 2011 -
Re: Sticks and Stones [lyrical]
Sticks and Stones [lyrical] You come at me with words so sharp, They slash my skin and leave a mark, They stay for life, those scars you leave, You though ...
Oct 22, 2011 -
Re: Headlights
Well, now. That was interesting. Didn't make a whole lot of sense, but it was good, anyway. There were some things that could've changed, though. Some lines, like say how ...
Oct 22, 2011 -
Re: Heroes And A Villain
Ah! So cute! I recognize some of the poses from the cover of X-Babies, I think. I especially like Gambit. I don't really know who 'Skylar' (was it?) is, but ...
Oct 22, 2011 -
Re: Laugh, Jane, Laugh
Why the hell is there no horror story category on YWS? I mean, isn't horror a genre?! Please note that this is the first time I've ever attempted to write ...
Oct 17, 2011 -
Re: Sticks and Stones
Sticks and stones may crack her bones, But words will always break her. Evil laughs and sneers and jeers: ‘Ugly,’, ‘Fat,’, ‘You loser,’ She cried inside, but kept it there; ...
Oct 10, 2011 -
Re: Is it love or another high school crush?
Woo! This is off to a good start! There were a few errors that I caught - quotation marks missing at the end of a quote, a few present-tense verbs ...
Sep 20, 2011 -
Re: Hold Me Tight (Part 2: END)
Story has been deleted and purged and stuff. If you REALLY wanted to read this, though, look for it on ff.net...
Aug 24, 2011 -
Re: Hold Me Tight (Part 1)
This story has been deleted and purged and stuff. Look for it on if you want, though...
Aug 24, 2011