LadyFreeWill

I was working on a story for FictionPress.com, and I had googled how many words a YA novel usually has (just for fun), and somehow YWS was on the results ...

This is incomplete, but I'd really like some reviews. Could you take a look, please? Thanks! -The Scratch Man

Chapter Four -Jamie Mystique Sorrow- Okemos, Michigan, USA, Earth. Next day/ first day of senior year of high school “You said he’d meet us outside the school.” Ronald Hipskin, Jamie’s ...

Wow! That's really colorful! I'm kind of wondering what the white creature is supposed to be, but I like the girl's hair (It's purtty). May I ask what you used ...

Hey Tinkem, Could you review this story for me? I don't really need a huge, detailed review, but I'd like to know what you think about the story. Thanks! -The ...

Wow! That's so pretty!

Oh, yeah sooooo believable. Do it with a guy you just met. *Right*.

Hm... I thought this story was pretty good. Things happened a little quickly at the end, but it was good to see that there was a *happy* ending. Good job!

Okay, this might just be because I have no sense of humor or something, but that wasn't funny. So it makes me wonder why some people are reviewing and saying ...

Yes, I think we all know that guy. Him , that is. Well written, Elizabeth! You wrote this story with a lot of sincerety!

Hm... I wonder how old Andres is, if he thinks the main character is really young. Anyway, I really liked this story; it was short, and it was very sweet. ...

Chapter Three -Raven Artemis Lee- Two day later, Manhattan Les Anseares, Below The thing that Raven really hated about going to school in another dimension was that she had to ...

This was mildly amusing for me. I agree with Death on number one. 'Specially about the last part!

I know I just posted, but I really wanted to answer this question!! [Solomon, The Code of Black: Pain in My Heart and Soul] Who the hell does he think ...

Some people take forever thinking about a name for their character, but that's not necessarily because they can't think of any -it's because as writers, we all want the perfect ...