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Re: Miss Conception
Hrmph... Pretty good, I suppose. It could've been a poem! Excellent... job well done.
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Into Africa (working title)
Erm... I think you have a thing for Africa. Anyway, good descriptions. I liked the beginning, when Christine was hearing and seeing Africa, but the end with all the hysterical ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Balloon
Well, it seemed poetic enough for me. I liked it. The narrator was having some girl/boy (most likely boy) troubles, huh? or maybe ex B/GF problems? :)
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Hope is burning
the know that the dousing lies ever so precariously o'er their weak shine That was a bit confusing for me, but maybe I'm just dumb :) I like the dark ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Truths About Last Night... Chapter 1
I'm with Lena on the too-much-characters part. Even though your grammar and spelling was perfectly fine, I got confused by all of the characters. I had no clue what was ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: i am a rifle
I liked the meaning of this poem, but the rhythmic flow wasn't very good. It was pretty good, I guess, if you thought it up during history. Usually that class ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Born a Peach, Die a Hero
Hm. Well, I suppose this play was mildly amusing. Juliet's stupidity was really getting on my nerves, though [frowns, remembering Juliet's stupidity]. Over all, though, this was an alright story. ...
Mar 26, 2011 -
Re: I call
Whoa! Now usually people read a poem and then rave about how deep and meaningful it is (Seriously people; "the Fog"? It's a stinking six lined poem about FOG!), but ...
Mar 24, 2011 -
Re: If
If If you can create a world with just your words Where sounds are bright and colors sing And your people’s fate is what you choose, If you can believe ...
Mar 24, 2011 -
Re: Book cover. O.o
Very nice! It makes me want to know what your novel is about...
Mar 24, 2011 -
Re: Calypso
Well... I can see how she might be a version of Calypso. She does look rather miserable... maybe it's because there's a starfish plastered to her head? Just joking! This ...
Mar 24, 2011 -
Re: I picked up the cam when I was bored late in the night
Whoa! How did you do the first photo? Is that, like, the hand of a statue? These were all very nice (Although I liked the first one the best... obviously)!
Mar 24, 2011 -
Re: Broken world.
Well, when I saw the name of this photo, I was all like, "This is probably going to be one of those pictures of shattered mirrors or something" and instead, ...
Mar 24, 2011 -
Re: Will You Fly With Me?
These pictures are very simple, yet the color makes them so beautiful! Good job!
Mar 24, 2011 -
Re: A bit of everything.
DUDE. These are really good! I like the first sketch without the coloring better... it looks more realistic that way (even though it's NOT realistic). Also, the girl in the ...
Mar 24, 2011
