LadyFreeWill

Would you mind reviewing the first chapter of my novel? It's of the sci-fi/fantasy genre.

Hey there :) Would you mind reviewing the first bit of my novel The Code of Black ? It's in the science fiction/fantasy genre. Thanks!

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Hey, so I know this is a late request, but... please? *offers a wheel of virtual cheese*

Hey there! Could you please review? Even if it's short? Thanks in advance!

Could you possibly find time to squeeze in a review (even if short) for chapter one of my novel "The Code of Black"? It'd be really nice, since I've been ...

... And this is why I should make more friends here. >.

Wow! The site looks fantastic! :)

Do you have to have a certain amount of points to change your username? If so, how many?

This storybook looks like it will be a fun read. And Ollie is automatically my favorite character because appearance= Dougie Poynter. But SisterItaly? Your character is listed as female, and ...

Hi there! My name is TSM and I'll be reviewing your writing today. :) Let's get started. Overall, it was well-written. Although the descriptions and whatnot were extensive, I was ...

Okay. This might be written under 'dramatic poetry', but to me, the end sounded more like one of those emails that are like 'so send it forward!'. Everything was okay ...

Ooh! Nice ending -I really liked it. There length of the poem was nice; real short, and I didn't have to read a lot. The beginning was okay, but by ...

Ooh! Nice ending -I really liked it. There length of the poem was nice; real short, and I didn't have to read a lot. The beginning was okay, but by ...

Hm. Well, this certainly is intriguing. I see that you've only got ONE wonder of six written. Going to add them? Anyway, I found your story very nice. There was ...