-
Re: The adventures of Poppy McLain-Two
Hello Vampire, Jade here to leave a quick review on your awesome story. I'll keep this short and name a few things I liked, as well as a few improvements ...
Sep 20, 2022 -
Re: Blacked Out
Liberty Mutual! Jade here to review your poem. The title caught my attention and I had to give it a look! While the title sounds more serious than the poem ...
Sep 20, 2022 -
Re: Rain | 3 Haiku Poems
Hi Libby, Jade here to review your haikus! Let's get right into it. I loved your haikus and the way they told a story with a scary conclusion. The idea ...
Sep 19, 2022 -
Re: i'm me
Hi Lib, Jade here to leave you a quick review on your work, "I'm me." The beginning alone is a cute start to this poem, it shows us the way ...
Sep 18, 2022 -
Re: What You Can See
Hi Libby, it's your bestie here to review the cutest poem ever, let's get started. The structure of Butterfly's poem starts wavering drastically, the first half is what she sees, ...
Sep 17, 2022 -
Re: Math
Hello dear Libby, it's Jade here to give a review on your piece! Let's get into it! Oh my is an iconic way to start a poem; you have caught ...
Sep 16, 2022 -
Re: Fairy Diary | Day 15
Hi Liberty! Jade here to leave you a review on the final installment of Fairy diaries! I really enjoyed this series, and the finale was... exciting, to say the least. ...
Sep 14, 2022 -
Re: Fairy Diary | 13 2/2 and 14
Hey Liberty! Jade here to review my favorite work of all time, Fairy Diaries. Let me get started with a short review, mostly nitpicking consistency. The random sketch was a ...
Sep 13, 2022 -
Re: Fairy Diary | Day 13 1/2
Hey Libby, my goodness this chapter was probably the cutest thing so far. I'm excited to review it! Just a nitpick, the college process isn't normally that simple, but good ...
Sep 12, 2022 -
Re: Fairy Diary | Day 12
Hello Libby! Jade back to review this installment of Fiary Diary on a VERY special day. Let's begin I love the lack of bold in this chapter, it's a lot ...
Sep 11, 2022 -
Re: Fairy Diary | Day 11
Hey crusty girl, your favorite gem here to review this new installment of your favorite book, Fairy Diary. Thank you for requesting this review, I know how proud you are ...
Sep 10, 2022 -
Re: Fairy Diary | Day 10
Hey Libby, jade here to give you a short review of my thoughts on this chapter! Again, it won't be as detailed, but it'll be helpful! The flow is a ...
Sep 9, 2022 -
Re: Fairy Diary | Day 8
Hey Kliberty, long time no talk! Jade here to leave you a review on the most poetic story on YWS. To being, the humor in this is actually pretty cute. ...
Sep 8, 2022 -
Re: Fairy Diary | Day 7
I have a bone to pick with this chapter of your "book" that "you" wrote. To begin, the dialogue is often slow, it runs around in circles and the banter ...
Sep 7, 2022 -
Re: Fairy Diary | Day 6
Hi Liberty! Hannah here to leave you a short review on your newest chapter. With no further ado, let's begin! I won't be super detailed here, as I've gone over ...
Sep 6, 2022
