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Re: The Others
Of fear, of pain we cry, pointing fingers at anything, anyone, except the mirror’s face: the leaders, the half-forgotten dead, the teenager remaining ignorant. The fires, the blood— so much ...
Oct 24, 2010 -
Re: The Phoenix Poem
Hello! I'm Lacey and I'll be ripping this...er...critiquing this poem today. *cough* Before I do 'red pen' this, I would like to assure you that I really liked it. Now ...
Oct 24, 2010 -
Re: Spirit Academy
Can I join this?
Oct 23, 2010 -
Re: Anxiety Disorder
Thank you both for the lovely compliments. I'm afraid of my ego now. :D I'll be sure to work on that punctuation. Again, thank you so much! ~ Lacey
Oct 20, 2010 -
Re: A fight for this world
Hi. I'm Lacey and I'll be reviewing your poem today. (That sounds like I'm a plane captain :D) I put punctuation in different colors in the quote and any comments ...
Oct 20, 2010 -
Re: Secret Desire
To touch a childhood long forsaken Where castles held up the sky. No longer will the fingernail of God Have to scratch reality aside. A time I want, where smoke ...
Oct 20, 2010 -
Re: Anxiety Disorder
I went to a poetry seminar for a couple of weeks and this is one of the things that spurred from a prompt we were given. Please feel free to ...
Oct 19, 2010 -
Re: Hide
This is the first in a bunch of stories of moments that have happened in my life. I couldn't write them like a normal non-fiction, because it didn't feel like ...
Jun 4, 2010 -
Re: Hello everyone!
This is why I need to fix the internet at my house. You people are too awesome for my own good. I guess I must tell you the story. It ...
Jun 4, 2010 -
Re: Hello everyone!
Suzanne, I must answer your question first as it seems it is the most dire. (I need to stop pretending to be dramatic) Quelf is the most amazing game in ...
May 26, 2010 -
Re: Hello everyone!
Hello all! My name is Lacey, though I can’t say that it’s who I am because I’m known by so many different name. This is a fun way of saying ...
May 26, 2010
