LaceyDreadth

I have come to beg your help. Apparently, you want that. XD Please be harsh. I promise I'm a big girl and I can take it. Name of short story/poem/novel/art ...

This poem is very raw and it needs help, so feel free to rip it to shreds. Trudging through the desperation of my deep-set rapture, musical steel thread filter through ...

They called us the dumpster kids, the ones with a box full of dreams. Kind of ironic, I guess. We lived on our dreams, Jodie. As long as we had ...

Hi there, I'm Lacey and I want to review your work! I really mean it, like, really. I haven't reviewed enough to tell you what I'm especially good at, but ...

Caris I clutched onto the messenger bag, now laying on my lap. The girl, who’d seen me sitting alone, had grabbed my suitcase, forcing me to sit with her if ...

Caris Blinking, she watched Louis go ahead. Her left hand still grasping onto the wheeled suitcase and her right playing invisible piano notes on her messenger bag. Louis is rather ...

Hello! I'm Lacey and I'll be reviewing today! I hope I can help. I put needed punctuation in bold, and made them red, inside of the quotes. I met you ...

Caris It was strange when the boy came up to her, his hair refusing to stay in one place, that her insecurities came crashing back. As he walked towards her, ...

Caris held in a scream, residing herself to yelling obscenities within her head. The car was stifling, almost suffocating her as the walls pressed on her mind. Of course, she ...

Name : Caris Haven Age : 15 (almost 16, in a few weeks. She’s actually just started saying she’s 16 to people because it seems more socially acceptable) Appearance : ...

I would like to reserve a spot for a female writer, if that's okay.

Jocelyn| Car| 1:49 Jocelyn shoved the white ski hat on her head, her light blue shirt contrasting against her dark jeans. To the protesting of her mother, she had already ...

Name : Jocelyn Beard Gender : Female Age : 14 Description : There is almost always a bright smile on her face, matching her vivid grey-green eyes. She wears her ...

Hey, I was wondering if you'd review this poem for me? I would be forever grateful. Lacey

Before I start this review, I must proclaim my love for this poem. It reminds me, in some way, of the psalms King David wrote. Full of his mistakes and ...