LRabbit

My neighbor was an odd bird. I don’t mean that she was an actual bird, but there wasn’t much human to her either. She was constantly doing things that made ...

When he had returned the night before, Joseph discovered that a new construction paper star had been stuck to the door with Scotch tape displaying the name Tristan Stillman. Until ...

You write so beautifully! You were nice enough to take an interest in my writing so I thought I would check out something of yours real quick! If all of ...

Sorry...I'm annoyingly unable to skim something and give it a good critique. Also, sorry for being bad at critiquing and taking so long. ANYWAY! For the second part: It had ...

Just a quick note: The character was originally named Alice. If you notice any "Alice"'s in there, let me know! Now, ten in the morning, Adie sat in the empty ...

Thank you very much for the welcome and the reviews! Adie's Story is just my working title. I'm not quite sure what to call it yet. Thanks again!

Please forgive me a small introduction. However, I assume that some people might find the main character a bit pathetic. Sadly enough, everything that happened to him in his childhood ...

Wow! I like your unique story. I don't know if I've ever read something about nose-picking before haha. Bravo on a good story. Your writing style is very good. You ...

I've read the first part and will read the second part later. I'm a busy bunny and like to be able to give something good thought which I think your ...

I like where you are going with this. I just joined up today and made my first post as well. There were only a couple of things that needed rethinking ...

Hi, new to the forum but your writing is very good. I enjoyed the scenario that you created. I also like the idea with "which one is the bad guy?" ...

Adie was lying in bed with her back to the opened window. Her lumpy, mismatched quilt was pulled high around her ears, with her clammy feet imprisoned in a pair ...