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Re: Love, Demise and Last Goodbyes ~ Her
Hi, I read your story from part one and just finished reading this part. I thought it was okay, couldn't stop reading! :) I think I saw a few mistakes ...
May 1, 2010 -
Re: Be careful what you wish for (short story)
That was really good and very sad but like I said very good. I also thought it was a bit scary with the old lady who seemed to stare into ...
Apr 23, 2010 -
Re: Love, Demise and Last Goodbyes ~ Him
Wow, that was a really good story and well told. I liked the descriptions in it. I did see a few mistakes in grammar but in the comment before mine, ...
Apr 23, 2010 -
Re: You're What? (i didn't know where else to put this)
It was an okay story to me and I liked how you kept us guessing what is wrong with the woman closer to the end when she was throwing up. ...
Sep 8, 2009 -
Re: Seeking Attention Part 2
Hi night owl. I loved the second part of your story. The only mistake that I could find was when you wrote : Feeling left out, Mary faked fits of ...
Aug 29, 2009 -
Re: Seeking Attention Part 1
Hi there. :) I just wanted to say that I was going to tell you some of the mistakes that I spotted but Barret seemed to catch the same ones ...
Aug 28, 2009