LRJack89

“I’ll take care of that glass for you Ms. Johnson.” said the restaurant manager. “Thank you.” said Nora, handing him the empty glass with a trembling hand. “Another glass please, ...

Hi, I read your story from part one and just finished reading this part. I thought it was okay, couldn't stop reading! :) I think I saw a few mistakes ...

~Hi everyone. So this is a story that I had to write for my English class. The assignment was to tell a story of some sort. I hope you enjoy ...

That was really good and very sad but like I said very good. I also thought it was a bit scary with the old lady who seemed to stare into ...

Wow, that was a really good story and well told. I liked the descriptions in it. I did see a few mistakes in grammar but in the comment before mine, ...

It was an okay story to me and I liked how you kept us guessing what is wrong with the woman closer to the end when she was throwing up. ...

Hi night owl. I loved the second part of your story. The only mistake that I could find was when you wrote : Feeling left out, Mary faked fits of ...

Hi there. :) I just wanted to say that I was going to tell you some of the mistakes that I spotted but Barret seemed to catch the same ones ...

Thank you all for all of your help! I will try to use each of those when I write my stories. :)

Hi everyone. I'm currently writing a novella and I've been having some trouble on how to put a setting/character in my story to make it sound more like a book. ...

Hi Thorn. It's nice to meet you :-) I'm pretty much into writing novellas and short stories. Right now, I am working on a novella that I hope to get ...

Hi Sunny, it's nice to meet you and thanks for replying. Yeah, I can see how this place can be addictive, I'm starting to like it more already :-) Anywho, ...

Hi everyone! My name is LRJack89 and I'm 20 years old. I love writing stories and just discovered this website today. My hobbies include reading, writing, and listening to music ...