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im sorry it's really long, and im not sure if it will make sense to anyone besides myself; feedback would be lovely ;) My Hypothesis: I like to push. Over ...

"Love is a malicious gift" this is quite wonderful.

i like your poem, more so the idea of it; it's really quite spectacular Too dense to carry.
 My clasp is still strong enough.
 I will always cling with fire, ...

if you where a fish, i would let you swim away if you where a fish, however your not, i wouldn't let you leave how does this not make sense? ...

Hey guys thanks for your reviews  My punctuation is probably pretty dodgy so that might have created a bit of confusion, I’ll try to explain it to you just ...

im not sure how to title, i wasn't really sure how to finish it; so i just left it. untitled Nothing means anything, No maker of sense. The trader of ...

Hey im new so im not sure how this works, i do a bit of anime myself so i thought i'de come look; these are really good they have sooo ...

wow i really like this poem, i must say im getting this idea that you've really been there :)

Oh really well your little box tells me your born in December and hermit crabs don't just die they get murdered by cruel A holes who neglect to feed them. ...

wowzer this is really great for a fifteen year old ;) i wonder why you don't replace fish with maybe a hermit crab? i think that would probably be more ...

Comparison To murder one with blade in hand To take a life precisely planned It’s not so easy with a blade Making run that scarlet shade To taste the life ...

A lyrebird is in fact a bird known for it’s ability to mimic human sounds famous for it’s ability to imitate the sound of a crying child. I used the ...

To be quite blunt i’de like to point out to lillymoore that poetry is not an art of correctness, i think by saying the sight of laughter your creating this ...

firstly i think silented1 should shut up, he sounds like an asshole, but i really like your poem i hope you don’t mind but i just printed it out and ...

firstly i love that you haven’t edited; coz makes enough sense to me ;) this is a beautiful piece of writing even for a sixteen year old let along a ...