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  • Other Poetry Re: Feeling Yourself Fall

    WHAT WAS GOING THROUGH YOUR MIND WHEN YOU WROTE THIS ... ITS VERY GOOD BUT READ THIS IF YOU DONT MIND AND TELL ME IF YOU FEEL THE SAME SURVIVE ...

    Feb 1, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: God's Calling

    I LIKE WHAT YOU WROTE READ THIS THO AND SEE IF YOU GET MORE OF A STORY LIKE VIBE WHEN YOU WRITE MORE. TO SURVIVE KEEP GOING ON.... YOU WORK ...

    Feb 1, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Moonlite Beach

    HEY I MUST SAY ITS VERY SHORT .BUT ITS GOOD THOUGH I WISH IT WAS LONGER THOUGH

    Feb 1, 2009
  • Romantic Novels Re: Was it wrong to love you ? Preface

    I LIKE THE STORY IT CATCHS MY ATTENTION KEEP ON WRITING .IF YOU DONT MIND PLEASE LET ME KNOW WHEN YOU AVE WRITEN MORE

    Feb 1, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: His Smile

    WOW YOU MAKE ME WISH MY SMILE WOULD BE THE SMILE THAT CHEERED YOU UP NICE POEM

    Feb 1, 2009
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: rain on roof tops[Updated]

    i must say you are good with your words but when i read your story it was kinda boring reading it . Now to be honest tho you can write ...

    Feb 1, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Let Not My Eyes Wander

    to me if i read something it must catch my mind off guard and take it on a journey i must say your poem did just that good job hope ...

    Feb 1, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: why life is so hard

    WHY LIFE SO HARD .......................................................DEAR GOD WHY IS LIFE SO HARD... WHY IS LIFE SO HARD ... READ AND PREACH FROM THE BIBLE... AS A YOUNG KID FIGHTING FOR SURVIVEL..

    Feb 1, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: breathless in are time

    TO SURVIVE KEEP GOING ON.... YOU WORK TO KEEP A HOME FOR U AND YOUR FAMILY ... A CAR ... OR TO PAY FOR WHAT EVER NEEDS YOU FEEL YOUR ...

    Feb 1, 2009


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