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WHAT WAS GOING THROUGH YOUR MIND WHEN YOU WROTE THIS ... ITS VERY GOOD BUT READ THIS IF YOU DONT MIND AND TELL ME IF YOU FEEL THE SAME SURVIVE ...

I LIKE WHAT YOU WROTE READ THIS THO AND SEE IF YOU GET MORE OF A STORY LIKE VIBE WHEN YOU WRITE MORE. TO SURVIVE KEEP GOING ON.... YOU WORK ...

HEY I MUST SAY ITS VERY SHORT .BUT ITS GOOD THOUGH I WISH IT WAS LONGER THOUGH

I LIKE THE STORY IT CATCHS MY ATTENTION KEEP ON WRITING .IF YOU DONT MIND PLEASE LET ME KNOW WHEN YOU AVE WRITEN MORE

WOW YOU MAKE ME WISH MY SMILE WOULD BE THE SMILE THAT CHEERED YOU UP NICE POEM

i must say you are good with your words but when i read your story it was kinda boring reading it . Now to be honest tho you can write ...

to me if i read something it must catch my mind off guard and take it on a journey i must say your poem did just that good job hope ...

WHY LIFE SO HARD .......................................................DEAR GOD WHY IS LIFE SO HARD... WHY IS LIFE SO HARD ... READ AND PREACH FROM THE BIBLE... AS A YOUNG KID FIGHTING FOR SURVIVEL..

TO SURVIVE KEEP GOING ON.... YOU WORK TO KEEP A HOME FOR U AND YOUR FAMILY ... A CAR ... OR TO PAY FOR WHAT EVER NEEDS YOU FEEL YOUR ...