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I really liked this. :D I've read your other stories, and I've learned to NEVER assume things cause I usually get surprised. :lol: It does sound a bit like little ...

I didn't find much wrong with it, but there were a few mistakes. This sentence doesn't sound right. Plus, you never start a sentence with a conjunction. "And use it ...

I really liked this story. :D It reminds me of how Victoria Alexander writes. Normally, switching back and forth between characters POV doesn't work, but you did an excellent job ...

60, huh? Hope I can write like this when I'm that old. :D The sensory words are AMAZING!!! I like reading a story that makes you feel like you're expericencing ...

Gah, I loved this chapter! Like everyone else, I loved, "Watch out. I've got super powers too.'' :D It was real cute and kinda flirty for your character, which is ...

Well, this was, um, unusual, to say the least. I liked it though. :D You write dialouge really well, which makes the story more intresting. What is Gage, exactly? How ...

Ok, so here's another story. :D Comments are appreciated! The title is still pending, so if you have any suggestions, let me know. The collision made no sound. It didn’t ...

This was a little unusual, but I liked it. You had a certain confidence about you when you would talk from your point of view, which was nice. How you ...

I really liked this chapter. :) It is a bit too much like Twilight, but by putting your own twist on it, the circumstances were both expected and unexpected, if ...

I liked this chapter. :) I agree with Clup that the flashback was a good show of Rebecca's innocence, which was nice to see. Basically everyone can relate to this ...

I agree with KJ about the whole mind-pictures thing. And I really can't see Renesme saying yes, yes, yes....., but I really liked it. You really had me picturing everything; ...

I liked it. It did have some errors, but besides that, it was very good. Keep up the writing! :)

this is my first posting, so feel free to comment! --- Breathing wasn’t an option. Neither was concentration. I couldn’t move any part of my body. The gorgeous stranger stalked ...