Kwantack

Incredible. I think it's really strong and clear and well thought-out. The stanzas look really good and you did very well with this. I'm not sure why but I can't ...

This made me feel like Alice in 'Alice in Wonderland' when she changes sizes all the time. I'm not really a photographer, so I probably wont' be that much help, ...

Wow, imagery was fantastic. The first line is really good, by the way, as is the title. I think you did a really good job with writing this. The lines ...

I was smiling by the first line. Lil'!!!! Awesome word. I think this poem is really cute and well done. I loved it so much I don't really know what ...

This is really cool--I enjoyed it a lot. Vocabulary is good, but I think you mean "Evil's" instead of "Evils" in line 5. I think if you added punctuation it ...

Wonderful. Simply wonderful. I loved it!

Hmm...this is very unique. One thing would be to capatalize all i's when they should be I's. Also, capatalizing the beginning of each line would make its appearance look cleaner. ...

This was great! The length is good too, I agree. I think your flow is amazing and the rhyming is good. Also, vocabulary was fantastic. Keep writing!

This is fantastic! Vocabulary is amazing, flow is great, and the grammar is wonderful. Also, the rhyming was very well done. Overall I loved this! Keep writing!!!

Wow. This is really cool!! I like it because it's simple yet complex. The lines and notes are perfect in every way (at least to me they are...I'm not much ...

This is excellent!! Yeah, I would definetely change saw to seen or whatever. That seems to be the only problem with it. I can tell that you put a lot ...

Hey, the first thing I noticed about this was the awesome flow. Well done with that!!!! I also think the vocabulary is good. Because the others did a nice job ...

This was beautiful. I have to tell you the reason I clicked on this: I'm in the process of writing a trilogy (or trying to, at least) and I always ...

This was made because it will be entered in a themed musical competition eventually and (given the fact that I've never written lyrics before) I understand that this needs work. ...

I think you properly used short lines without making the poem sound like BLEH!! (That probably doesn't make any sense...sorry) Also, I thought this was truly well done. I'm not ...