Kwantack

This is so cool! The repetition of 'I am a poet' isn't abused or annoying, it's perfect. The first line of the whole thing really drew me in. I'd pick ...

Wow!!! This reminded me of a curious little kid who just wants to explore or something! Think about capatalizing each line, but that's not a huge problem. When I was ...

I really enjoyed this! The format was interesting and exciting and flowed nicely. Here's what I noticed: There's a lump in my throat that just won't go Could you maybe ...

This is awesome. Creepy, yes, but very legit. Silentwords already sniffed out everything I could find. The rhyming was excellent! It has a great rhythm. You may consider capatalizing each ...

Ohmigoodness. This is so cool. I really liked it because I'm a figure skater and I can totally relate to this (especially about the clumsiness). Are you a skater too? ...

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Wow!! These are so cool!! The first one is my favorite. It reminds me of an ant or something...These are beautiful. Great job and keep it up!!

I enjoyed this! You have a good way with words. Behindthemask already said the only thing I could find, the tide thing. And the ending did seem a bit odd ...

This is very interesting, as I was thinking of freedom before I read this. Just a few things. Art all the lines in the first stanza supposed to rhyme? If ...

Dedicated to a depressed friend of mine...sorry for the awkwardness of the rhythm...'twas meant to be five beats per line... Doth the light of daytime catch thy eyes Or does ...

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Wow. The ending is really surprising but you went into it very well. It wasn't too sudden or too drawn out, so congrats on that. This isn't really my area ...

I love these...what are they called...vertical poems? Yeah. This is really cool! I liked the emotion you put into it. Just a couple of things... Running away to find a ...

I agree with write4life--I think you need to separate your paragraphs a little more. This will make it easier to read. But other then that, I think this was really ...

I liked this. Some things that I would change, though, would be: First line, get rid of first comma. Same goes for second to last line--the comma at the end ...