Kwantack

Intresting...very good grammar and punctuation. Vocabulary is good too.

Gasp! I remember doing these in third grade! Of course, mind looked really...disturbing, actually. I think it had green hair and blue lips or something strange like that...oh, just looking ...

Wowzers, that's really phenomenal. Your vocabulary is superb and even if people didn't know some of the words, the way you state them helps them understand what you're trying to ...

Holy jumpin' cows! Now I'm scared. This is awesomely done, but I believe on the last line you mean 'there' instead of 'their' but that's an easy mistake. I do ...

Here the bridge stands awaiting your decision Its sight mysterious at your envision And as you read this calm incision Knowledge you add to your provision. Here there is no ...

The last line really makes the poem complete, I think. That's awesome!! It'd be really cool if you made it longer, I think as well. But it's your poem, so ...

Coolio! I think 'along' is supposed to be 'a long' but other than that, it looks great! I enjoyed reading this. Good job.

This one gave me shivers, which is a good thing. Spectacular flow and rhythm. You have a creative way with poetry. Keep up the good work and never give up!

Awww! You don't see a lot of this poetry, making this quite unique. I love how the format changes a little every once in a while, giving it it's own ...

Saddening! I actually made the puppy-dog face with this one. It's very constructive and well explained, the setting and all. Fantastic poetry.

I don't really have a comment, sorry. It's rather...complete, which is great! I'm at such a loss for words right now, and perhaps that's what you were going for. If ...

Dude, that's so cool! I couldn't take my eyes off of it (congrats on that). Just a few things: try not to use "The" so much for the beginning of ...

I love its rhythm. And like others have said, some cleaning up in punctuation/grammar would certainly give it a nice polish, for lack of a better word. Perhaps not a ...

Though I never heard you calling You knew I was there to help. And though we saw no signs… …no clear signs… We cannot blame you, Nor anyone else still ...