Kwantack

Wow! A very true and well done piece. A little punctuation and capitilization would complete this! I've written a poem about life (or rather, its opposite) and I don't like ...

This is very well done! And it has a great emotion to it. I think the only thing I noticed was that truly was spelled truely which is probably one ...

Wow. This is surprisingly sad and scary at the same time for me. I just noticed one thing on the line "But nonetheless". It seems a little redundant because those ...

This is very well written. Thank you for using punctuation! There are so many people who seem to forget about it...I love the poem's flow. Great job and keep up ...

It's perfect in every way possible!

Then I feel sorry for you. Appearance has been greatly exaggerated over time and is now a huge problem in society and I really don't care what I look like, ...

Lovely! Truly amazing! People these days NEED to read this. I really enjoyed this. You should probably add some punctuation, though. I loved it! Keep writing!

I'm quite speechless. It's very well-written, and sounds like you put a lot of thought into this (which is something I should learn to do with my writing). And, this ...

Where this came from (this might help): This is the result of two friends, who have been stocking up on sugar (mainly pixie stix, which kind of explains the whole ...

A very unique flow, but definetely an enjoyable piece. If you've accomplished what you wanted, I say well done!

Interesting, but I'm not sure if the format of the poem is supposed to have so many I's when beginning the line. Perhaps you could make that a little clearer.

Beautiful! I love it! It's so calm and relaxed, which isn't found in many other pieces. Great job!

I love both reading and writing science fiction, and really enjoyed this piece. What I noticed immediately is how creative you are with naming your characters! I mean, wow, can ...

Hahaha this reminded me of my 8th grade weather report. It's very unique, but maybe make it a little longer.

Dude, I loved this! And it sounds like everyone else does too! Maybe add a period at the end of your last sentence, and job well done!