Kwantack

Whoa, I found this really...creepy, but sort of humorous. I don't really know. It was epic. Here's what I noticed: Welcome, unknowing tourists! Beautiful opening. We have all sorts of ...

As she screams “You’re heartless-a monster” If these are all one person talking, you don't need end quotes until the last part. “And I am a liar, but I can ...

This poem is really cool! It's loving yet sad and enjoyable at the same time. Some things I noticed were: My friend, so close, In air... These dots here(and the ...

Trust. I like the period here. A funny Five letter word Period here. You blew mine away Like dust Period My world has Been held by many Try a comma ...

This poem is so elegant and beautiful. It sounds so proper and gentle - it reminds me of a tea party! :D Beauty, pity your broken soul, I love this ...

Wow. This is a very inspirational piece of poetry. That, and I just finished watching "Fly Away Home" about flying geese, so this is just really cool! Let me see ...

XD XD XD I totally have someone that I should listen to this poem! Do you mind if I recite it to him? I really liked this. It's really funny ...

I loved this! All of it! You did a fabulous job describing stuff and giving words an image, giving it depth. You had a lot of good vocabulary in this ...

Okay, since Soulkana did a really nice job with most of the grammar, I'm gonna assume that you'll listen to that advice and look at some other stuff besides grammar, ...

This is beautiful!!! Wow, you did an amazing job here. The last stanza is, by far, the best, I think. But I liked the entire thing! The other reviewers did ...

Awesome Possum! The spelled out title was cool, but a little hard to read. Try bolding the letters or making them coloured or something. That way we can still enjoy ...

You had good imagery with this and described stuff very well. I think this is a great topic and you did a great job with the emotion and everything. You ...

I loved this poem! To me it made sense and I understood it. I liked the topic, you had good ideas here. Humans aren't meant to die I think you ...

Shiney already did a great job with the detailed work, so I don't have a lot to add. I do agree that that one line is broken up a little ...

I think I know what you're going for, but you haven't quite reached it yet. There's something that this poem needs, but I'm not sure exactly what yet. I can’t ...