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Re: Icefire - part 1
I like the story, but there are lots of grammar errors. If you fix those, it will be even better!!! :D
Feb 23, 2010 -
Re: Out of Love #1
hey I agree with IzumiRyuichi. Although I do love this!!!
Feb 22, 2010 -
Re: Why do we love?
This story has a great base, it just needs a little help around the edges with grammar, spelling, and punctuation. :D
Feb 22, 2010 -
Re: Three Things/You're It 2
I LOVE this!!! You must write more!!!!!! I'll die if i don't know the rest of this!!!
Feb 22, 2010 -
Re: For a Reason
Great storyline but i agree with Loveless. It went to fast!! :P
Feb 21, 2010