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Re: Books made into movies?
Hello Everyone! I wrote this for the YWS news. I want it to be good, so tear it apart as much as needed. I'm looking for a new beginning and ...
Sep 1, 2010 -
Re: I Still Want You
Hey, I'm Ktg17! Happy Reviewing Sunday! F.Y.I., I never review Lyrics, so I'll do my best with this. This was pretty good for your first song. I can totally see ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: This word reminds me of... [2]
Cake
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: A humble essay-writer.
Hello and Welcome! YWS is an AWESOME place to be, and we're all so glad you are here to enjoy it with us! If you have an questions you can ...
Jul 19, 2010 -
Re: Does anyone else hate the Twilight series?
I have not read the books OR seen the movie, but I already don't like themI don't like how everyone calls you crazy if you haven't read them, and INSANE ...
Jun 19, 2010 -
Re: I love you
This piece has so much passion, but also so much more potential. I liked it, don't get me wrong, but here are a few tips. 1) You start with the ...
Jun 1, 2010 -
Re: Everything
OK, this was really sweet and romantic. Overall great job. I did notice a few minor errors though. 1.) Maybe say how old the characters are. I was thinking at ...
May 26, 2010 -
Re: Ask Me! Ask Me!
Hey! My story is in Romantic Fiction, and the title is "Anna and Ryan-their story" Thanks! I'm really not looking for grammar errors reviews, but more along the lines of ...
Apr 1, 2010 -
Re: Curious for a review?
Hey! My story is in Romantic Fiction, and the title is "Anna and Ryan-their story" Thanks!
Apr 1, 2010 -
Re: Anna and Ryan- their story
Thanks so much for reviewing, everyone! :D Glad you all like it!
Mar 26, 2010 -
Re: Anna and Ryan- their story
Hey everyone! This is a story I just wrote when I couldn't sleep one night, and I know it's not perfect. I'm really not looking for grammar reviews, but more ...
Mar 25, 2010 -
Re: YA romance
Hello! I really liked this, it was sweet and romantic, and I definitely want to read more, but I did notice one thing. Have you ever read the book Dear ...
Mar 21, 2010 -
Re: Once again Prologue
Wow! I really love this! It really pulled on my heartstrings!!! :D I only noticed one thing: you called Seth's mom "Mary", and then it was "Marry", but this was ...
Mar 21, 2010 -
Re: Your Spiderman
Hey Hero~ Like I told you before, I really love this. It's really sweet, and it gets right at your heart. :D “I need you, Elle, like the water needs ...
Mar 21, 2010 -
Re: Just Another Day
OK, there are A LOT OF GRAMMAR ERRORS HERE!!!!!! GO through and fix them, and then I'll tell you how the story is. I don't mean to be rude, I'm ...
Mar 21, 2010