Krystalstars

I dunno, I think the prolouge is the hook.

I'm sitting on my bed And letting the rain come Letting it run down my face How could you do to me? Like it alot! There's a hole in the ...

Who here likes HP? I do! I think it should end up like this in the final book Lupin+ Tonks & Ron + Hermione

My problem is when it comes to grammer..I have no clue! LOL

Thank you all for the wonderful tips, I will be working on these chapters for a while so keep checking back. As for some of my "Carless mistakes." Well....I have ...

Problem: That no one has gaven me before Problem fixed: That no one has given me before Over all tho it was VERY good!

I like it alot but this... "Convince myself, don’t believe her And put it behind you" Confused me. I thought we were talking about a guy.... Overall it was good ...

Chapter 3 Misty stirred in her sleep, it was dark outside and rain was pounding at the windows. Jordan was writing in her journal about her day at school. Dear ...

Chapter 2 Misty crept through the door, she had returned home to grab her bags. She tip toed across her dark, dingy trailer’s living room to her room. She closed ...

Jordan and Misty are best friends and also witches attending they're third year at Smogwarts, The American school for witches, they plan for smooth sailing but things go wrong. Jordan ...

You can be assured that I will be goin on with this! Thank you for the critic.....I didn't see the spell check button but I will use that now that ...

They're good! But if you quit doughting yourself they'll get better...

Very good, although I'd expand it a bit. Make it more discriptive!

Way fun! When else can you talk to strangers and beg for candy in one night?

CHAPTER 1 _____________________________________________________________ Colton Ryd shivered, he was standing at the rail of his ship The Pillager Waiting for the captain, the crew was just far enough