Krupp

Nice to see someone clarify (or try to anyway) what the difference between showing and telling really are. Cheers.

It sounds like a decent start. And the fact that you've been slaving over it for all these years certainly helps. I myself have never been able to write a ...

A contemporary novel, eh? Good luck with writing something like that, mate. I have had trouble writing one of my own, though it's a tad bit different from yours, obviously. ...

This sounds unique to me; and that's what fascinates me. Weird or no, the story will work because it's not your typical story, for a change. Although i can't explain ...

I used to write for the hell of it, but that's changed. I wanted to get published when I was younger, but even then, I knew just looking at my ...

Yeah, dang, don't give up. You're progressing further than some of us have ever gone.

It reminds me of Stephen King's CELL, but that's only because that has to do with cellphones..heh. Give it a try writing-wise, and see what comes out. Worse comes to ...

I have a bad habit of trying to come up with too many stories at one time. Right now I'm working on two different novels at the same time, but ...

I'm really glad to see someone lay it all out like that. It really gives a booster.

If you don't want it to be a christian story, relax. Just write it and see how it comes out first. Worst comes to worst you can always go back ...

It sounds good to me....

...I agree with ankhirke. Write it like it's a vivid image in your head. If you really need any inspiration for that, then just vividly imagine yourself being really pissed ...

I'm a storyteller at heart. I'm never thinking about what's happening to me at the moment; I'm imagining what COULD happen to me; or what could happen to someone LIKE ...

sad as it might be, I don't have a real plan when I start writing. I have a simple idea I want to make into a story, and I go ...

I always write in the past. It's not that I'm scared of writing in the present; it's just no fun for me.