Krupp

I don't swear that often; probably because if anyone in my family saw it they'd be pissed. But swearing - especially f--k and b--ch and s--t, they just degrade the ...

I tried to write a book in the present tense once with a first-person viewpoint; it was the most difficult thing I've ever tried. I abandoned the idea after that. ...

I don't swear that often; probably because if anyone in my family saw it they'd be pissed. But swearing - especially f--k and b--ch and s--t, they just degrade the ...

Oddly enough, I'm reminded of Metallica's "One"...the only thing I think I caught that needed to be fixed is the word "peaces" in line 3 of the third stanza. I ...

ads that keep coming up that p*** you off...people that keep pushing something on you that you don't want to hear or buy from them...constant, stupid emails that you don't ...

I used to be able to eat a steak and watching things like The Devil's Rejects... But I stopped doing that. Not right for the mental side of your health. ...

I've heard scarier and crazier things done...

I slacked my way through high school and barely survived... now I'm stuck at home until the end of summer at a community least I'm transferring to a real university ...

I feel like that a lot when I get on here.. but kidding aside, some of the best stuff doesn't get read right away.

[1:1] “Who’s that guy?” “What, you think I know? He ain’t from around here, that’s for sure.” All eyes were on the shiny, black Cadillac that had stopped at the ...

Congratulations on finishing the rough draft. I know that feeling too well, getting bored in the middle of a draft, wanting to write something else. Often more than not I've ...

It almost could be a freestyle if you rearranged some of ending parts of a few lines...but that's what makes this piece so inspiring. Not sure if the long lines ...

This is the best thing I've read on this forum so far...I really can't say there's anything that really needs critiquing here. Congratulations. That was one hell of a poem.

This verse didn't seem so useless to me. Maybe I'm just abstract. I haven't a clue. But it was decent to me. The only thing is that you should reconsider ...

This poem seemed scatterbrained. I couldn't really get a notion of what exactly happened. Might want to work on that.