Krupp

Every antagonist I've created I've partially based off of myself. I'm not insane. I just have a few traits I think some antagonists could benefit from having....

A clever way of revealing characteristics through the eyes of another...that was truly impressive. Short and simple; to the point. It had a great ring throughout the whole piece. I ...

I'm currently writing a book about a group of college musicians forming a band. The sound of their style is going to (most likely, anyways. I'm not too sure yet.) ...

Welcome to the club, mate.

A fine poem built up off of raw emotion...aside from a few small spelling errors (ex: lerched is actually "lurched") this was a fine piece. The rhyming in random spots ...

Okay, I might as well keep this just in case. I'm writing and planning out a novella/novel that I have yet to put a name to. But let's start, shall ...

You started most of your lines with, 'I' and I'm not complaining; but it might be better if you considered starting a few of the lines with different words or ...

The only thing I've really got to say is that maybe you shouldn't space the two stanzas like that. Put the last two lines of the poem with the other ...

This seemed more like it could've been lyrics to a Chevelle song instead of a poem...but the raw emotion was a nice touch. The emotion was the best part of ...

I haven't read King in a long time...I'll have to look this one up. King used to be my favorite author.

If you've got writers block, I wish you luck in throwing it off. I had that for pretty much all of 2007 except in December when I started writing my ...

I wish people would stop making these threads...they force me to run off and rant. 1. The Offspring: I've been listening to them for years now, and they always are ...

I need a topic for a speech as well. I'm thinking of doing a band I really like...but all in all good luck with that...

Welcome to the club.

The last stanza threw me off, but the rest was fine.