Krupp

To tell you the truth, this confused me. Of the selfishness and tame...why the tame? Is it just because it rhymes. Ky This is what threw me off as well. ...

This sound like something my brother used to write...it's got a distinctive feel to it. I like that about it.

I have difficulty writing lyrics for my far out of the three albums I've done (two finished and the third one still in the works) they've all been instrumental. I ...

the lines starting with "Rubble..." and "And sleep..." don't seem to really fit well with the rest of piece. Think about playing around with those two lines and fixing them. ...

It might be good to enlighten those of us who aren't sure what the usage of the word 'overdraft' clearly means...I haven't a clue.

I really didn't see anything that needed to be fixed a whole this read well and, quite frankly, is one of the better poems I have seen on here...keep posting ...

Welcome Jade. Hope you enjoy yourself.

April 13th- I've gotten lazy, but I'm back at it. I was too busy writing music on my computer to just write the novel; I was really cranking out the ...

If you can't find something to write about, don't write at all...I know that I might get butchered on here for saying that, but I can't 'just write something' because ...

Uh...sure thing. It might be a bit. I've got to work on the music first.

[Verse] So you’ve got yourself a gun. Got yourself a reason to adjust. I admit that I wasn’t perfect. Apparently you didn’t get the memo. Can you carry on. When ...

What are you trying to understand, exactly?

It's definitely a great way of putting the thoughts down on paper, the way you phrased everything... But on the other hand, it makes everything seem vague and strange. Might ...

I used to write perfect characters. But after a while I stopped. It's not like writing someone who has a problem or suffers from an internal condition. Nowadays pretty much ...

I'm currently writing a book about a group of college musicians forming a band. The sound of their style is going to (most likely, anyways. I'm not too sure yet.) ...