Krupp

I have a love of music that is so great, I created this. Here you go, for those of you who actually like experimental stuff and things of that nature... ...

Well, I've read it. I had a hard time figuring out who was talking at times, and it seemed too vague at other points. I'm kind of big on letting ...

They say you're not supposed to bump threads around here...I guess that's why no one reads mine...heh.

If I was badmouthing you I would have sent a pm. As it is, I really don't care what you think. But I feel bad that I'm digressing from a ...

As I sit here, my speakers gently injecting my ears with King Crimson's "In the Court of the Crimson King," I can recall the glory days of music back when ...

It's not exactly terrible. People on here just complain a ton. It does do the whole cliche thing with Nerds, but that's actually the only real problem I see here...

Have a good one on here. Don't feel bad if you don't fit in at school. Quite honestly, most kids I met in school aren't worth hanging out with.

I never say much. But when I do speak it's clear, I know quite a bit.

Good luck writing the story; I was writing one called "Keep it Cool" and it's on the Advanced Critiques page...It's difficult to write something about music. But in no way ...

A great piece...a grammar problem in the first stanza, but otherwise it works very well. Post more often, will ya?

A bit more of telling than showing...but it has heart. Next time, try to pace the storry a bit, instead of just rambling on almost was difficult for me to ...

2Pac had something to say back in the day...before he let his rivalry with Biggie get in the way. Men like that who creat beats and rhymes I have all ...

You probably shouldn't bother...I've dropped the piece and I'm not quite sure what I'm writing right now...

Honestly it did make me feel better...

I think you should've broken down some of the lines; they didn't sound like they were clicking when read aloud. Besides that it was fine.