Krupp

This contained a lot of decent imagery, and I have a deep respect for that. But it was a bit too vague, in my opinion. There was a tale behind ...

I really wish I could find soemthing to say about this...sorry. It's too good and simple for me to really critique or spot any kind of error. The only thing ...

120,000 words? That's something I haven't quite achieved yet...still working to hit that milestone. At any rate, congratulations, and good luck editing the story to your heart's content.

(Verse 1) In the end is the struggle worth the prize you always seek Nevermind What does it matter anymore No one ever wins the prize at the end of ...

It's difficult (at least for me) to rhyme, so I have to give you credit for doing something that I rarely ever do. WIth that said, the simplicity of this ...

I have to admit, this isn't a poem. This is more like a freestyle or lyrics... It isn't as gross as I thought it would be, having read the other ...

Well, I said I would take a look at what you wrote, and here it is. I saw only two real problems; showing Martin's thoughts, and telling. You'll hear that ...

Posted up the next segment of Keep it Cool. No one's read it yet or even downloaded it, yet my hopes are high. I have no idea what I'm going ...

If we're talking about the old star wars trilogy, then I'd cast my vote on that...I think it's one of the finest trilogies ever made. No disrespect to LOTR of ...

This is pretty good. The focus of the poem, the message, is pretty clear. And the imagery was all right... Simple and to the point. Sometimes that strategy works, and ...

I'm just gald that this primary **** is finally finished. I was starting to really get ****ed off with it. I'm planning on voting for McCain as of the moment, ...

It's cool to hear you guys are new to this...I was fifteen when I wrote my first novella, so I can tell you from experience that the first time is ...

I decided to continue the story, so here it is. Chapter 4, following Chad and his buddies to a party of younger kids. I won't ruin anything else. This is ...

This was a great start so far...I'm really enjoying this. There are maybe one or two grammar issues, but besides that, the piece was written well. The imagery is great, ...

This might be the finest piece i've read on this forum, regarding imagery. That's the kind of writing I absolutely love. This was a complete sucess if you're setting up ...