Krupp

Wherever you posted your work, I'll read it. WHerver it is.... And dude, listen to the people on here. THey've got good suggestions. If you can't imagine what comes next ...

Personally I never saw what was so horrible about cliches. YES - one should try to be original. And you can't always rely on cliches. But sometimes when I'm read ...

Clearly this one had some anger behind it, and that's what made it so good. The emotion made me feel the power behind the words. And then of course, the ...

my advice is to name your villain Todd....I mean, seriously, who'd expect that? It's random, yes, but it's so simple that it'll make the readers laugh not matter what....

Perhaps I've merely misunderstood what this thread is all about (and if I have please inform me.) but I've always thought that when you're writing something it was best to ...

Another novel of mine that I'm working on...this is the first two chapters. It tells the story of a different America in the future, in which the USA has been ...

Perhaps I've merely misunderstood what this thread is all about (and if I have please inform me.) but I've always thought that when you're writing something it was best to ...

For some strange reason this preface makes me recall Hunter S. Thompson...I can't figure out why though. It's a good start. I didn't really see any real glaring errors that ...

This isn't a bad piece, but I think maybe the pace should be changed a bit. When I was reading it I was fumbling over the lines, trying to read ...

Well, I gotta be seems kind of bland. When I say that, I mean that it doesn't really have a beating heart. And what I mean by that is that ...

It's strange...I don't see too many of these kinds of poems nowadays...I miss them...

Cheesy this poem might have been, but it worked out well, which was a surprise... Honestly, the rhyming scheme was what made this piece great. The simplicity of the piece ...

Keep your first novel. I have. And I'm glad that I haven't published it or thrown it away. It's horrible stuff, really. But looking back at it, it definitely keeps ...

I don't have really favorite bands except a few who've lasted with me for years. I go into phases where I listen to certain bands and stuff. Right now, I'm ...

As short as it was, this was admirable for its stortelling. The imagery was great as well.. I really don't have much to say. There were two grammar errors that ...