Krupp

Peter.

This is probably the most haunting piece I've read on these forums.. I really don't have much to say, besides that it was a very impressive story that's been written ...

My pleasure.

A few grammar issues were in there, but I won't harp about character development because everyone else has already tagged that.. I think this piece needs a tad bit more ...

All poetry equates the same feeling to me, so I really don't have a favorite. I just enjoy reading it and that's about it. If I had to pick SOMETHING ...

Simply darken the mood of a given scene with dark imagery.... Seriously. Think about what creeps you out, and then use that kind of creepiness to set up your own ...

In my experience on the forums and outside of it, I've learned that while there's never an ORIGINAL story now, you can indeed take a idea used before and twist ...

Much obliged. I'll keep that in mind when a new part gets put out...

I would suggest a combination of options A and B....seeing as that is how I would be anywhow.

A vague topic description, but it will make sense as you read the chapter anyway. Picks up from where the first two chapters leave off. Michael Bane is going to ...

Yeah, really, just be careful when writing the epilogue that you don't give away too much. If you have any big twists in mind for the story, set them up ...

It sounds similar to something...I just can't think of WHAT. But I have to agree with the poster above me; the meaning doesn't necessarily be obvious, but I think small ...

Buy the DVD of all the seasons. What would you do if you found that you had the power to turn water into wine?

I could see this as a spoken-word kind of song.... Which is to say, it wasn't bad. It was rather interesting, and I would love to hear the beat or ...

I started writing when I was ten years old. I started out by trying to make little comic books of my heros back then: Mega Man, the good guys from ...