Krupp

...Maybe I will put up the new piece. Who knows? Right now I'm just trying to finish up the last 2 weeks of school. After that I should have more ...

...This seems much improved. Yet it still retains the great emotion it had before...excellently done, and my bad for not commenting on this earlier.

I thought you said you'd binned this?? I was going to crit it all but then you said you'd ditched it. Have you started with it? Because if you have ...

I'm a storyteller at heart. I'm never thinking about what's happening to me at the moment; I'm imagining what COULD happen to me; or what could happen to someone LIKE ...

This is a continuation from Chapter 4. I don't know if anyone's been keeping up, but I'm posting this anyways: Rated PG-13 for torture.

Well, I read through it... I'm not usually the type who gets really, really deep into analyzing and critiquing. I'm sorry that's what you really needed. The only thing that ...

..Not exactly new in sense of style, though. I was inspired by what John Milton did with Paradise Lost,and I tried to do the same thing. I am a romantic ...

Righto. I read it earlier this morning but didn't get a chance to say here. I think it was fairly confusing, mate...sorry. But the whole conversation about dinner made no ...

I have to admit that I'm way behind in reading this. I haven't even read the other chapters of the story. However, I am curious as to what this is ...

sad as it might be, I don't have a real plan when I start writing. I have a simple idea I want to make into a story, and I go ...

I always write in the past. It's not that I'm scared of writing in the present; it's just no fun for me.

I would consider changing almost every part that says, "I am" because repeating that makes it sound dead. Besides that, I can't really say you did anything reall wrong...just find ...

Whenever I get writers block, I usually get up and say, "time for a smoke" and then I'll proceed to go have one. Now that I'm on a smoke-free campus, ...

You can certainly try...I'm focusing on two different novels, one about a college student and musician, and a newer one centered around two guys in high school. It's not impossible ...

Write both of them at the same time. Seroiusly. Start on one right now, and when you can't write anymore or can't think, start on the other one. works for ...