Krupp

Everyone else seems to post on this sub-form, so I figured it wouldn't hurt to give it a shot as well... There's not so much to say about me other ...

Being 20 had nothing to do with it, quite honeslty. I've been writing since the age of ten, so I've been able to slowly (very slowly) develop my writing in ...

I'll tell you something that seems to work for me if you want to change your title: Think about what your story is really all about. Get down to the ...

Well, it doesn't really do you much help if you ask us for ideas, because they wouldn't be yours; in the end, we're the ones writing the story then. Really, ...

Catcher in the Rye has always been annoying for me to read. Too much complaining from Holden for me to enjoy it. I honestly don't see how it is considered ...

It is Chrissy so I'm thinking the forum might be a little dead crit-wise? You're not the only one who's been thinking that...

My problem is that for different stories I have different sets of music to keep me driving forward. For Keep it Cool I listen to bands like Kyuss, Red Hot ...

Her Grim Reapder (Another of Mine): Worlds collide as a lonely, shattered girl crosses path with a street freak who compeits in illegal street fights just so that he can ...

When I was young, Stephen King was my main influence. I had teachers saying about my stories "I don't know if he'll be the next Stephen Spielberg or the next ...

I was in a dark place when I wrote this, just thinking about something I'd read on here about 'perfection' and I had to write something. I rated this R ...

Nicely done. Only thing I can say is that maybe you should consider your spacing between paragraphs, because it comes across very abrupt when it's being read. With that said, ...

It sounds like a decent start. And the fact that you've been slaving over it for all these years certainly helps. I myself have never been able to write a ...

There's nothing wrong with a 'perfect' character so long as there's a purpose for the perfection, I would think... My problem is that I can't write a perfect character. I ...

This sounds like it could've been in the book of Psalms, sort of...and that's a compliment, believe it or not. I find it rather interesting to read into something that ...

Wow. That defenitely looked fun to write. Very challenging to be able to get words starting with the same letter workign like that in a sentece; I've never been able ...