Krupp

Well, I'll be brutally honest, because I don't know how else I can help... The whole work so far consists of the infamous writing mistake called "telling" and I don't ...

This was all right for the start. I think next time maybe you should keep from speaking about your character in the first person unless you introduce special traits to ...

I don't know if there's a thread on this already or what; I just put this down without even really checking. But for the first time in my ten years ...

Ehhh, I don't get why sexuality needs to be described so deeply. If it's just a passing moment in a scene that's not really described in deep detail I can ...

I can't answer the first question, because that's your decision to make, not ours. But sure, definitely post it on here some time.

Chad Palma: college guy and musician. "Genocide" by the Offspring "Demon Cleaner" by Kyuss "Inner Light Spectrum" By 311 "The Kicking Machine" by the Melvins "Dig Up Her Bones" by ...

...how do we do this? I'm just gonna take a stab at it. A man slouching against the bar, his dark eyes staring down at the glass in his hand. ...

Er...wrong place to post this, mate. Check the writing section, and put it in one of the fiction sub-forums. That'll get people's attention.

...well, everyone's got an opinion and has jumped in on this, so I will too. My musical tastes are way left field compared to the pack here though. But we'll ...

are these supposed to be our own personal rules, or rules that generally should apply to everyone? if the former, then here are mine: 1. It's okay to bend the ...

...personally? I've tried this 'writing whatever down' thing before, and it never did jack for me. I suppose it works for some while just being an annoyance to others.

My problem is that I have too many works going at the same time, and too many ideas flowing back and forth that some of them are mixing together. But ...

Hey ya'll I'm new here thought I'd drop in and say hey. I reckon I'll see how this goes as I'm a little leery of putting my writing up for ...

Thanks for reading it. I've picked the project back up, for anyone who read my earlier statement and decided not to get into it...I'll be posting the rest of the ...

My one real requirement is that I need to be in a certain mood to write a specific storyline. That's my only real requirement.