Krupp

I liked this, because it wasn't like some others I've read which just rant on endlessly. It has a great conclusion, except for one line that bothered me... The ending ...

...mostly, everything Monki said will work well enough. However, it's not the grade of high school that matters in the ending; it's how the characters are written. There is one ...

“If I may have a moment of your time, Lord?” Maghnus turned around as Sean kneeled before him. “We are alone, my son,” Maghnus said evenly. “You do not need ...

This seems kind of short, which is surprising... Kinda makes it hard for me to be able to say anything about it. The description was nice, but the ending seemed ...

To be honest, I never really got into the Beatles...I'm more of a King Crimson fan.

This cannot be a part of a school-related school would ask a kid to try and get a definition out of that.

You know, rarely do I read about dwarves being written as main characters. I find this a cool notion, because it is so rare and fun. I actually would take ...

I split this chapter is half so that it is more readable than the last one. A bit more is explained in this chapter about the different worlds, so this ...

Well, you're not the only student who hates the hectic party scene... Don't worry about your work being ripped apart on here. It happens to the best of us, and ...

Welcome to the family. You'll like it here, I'm sure.

Welcome to the club. Be nice, and good things will come to you. That's all I learned when I first got on here...

...man, when you said 'funky jazz' immediately I started to think of King Crimson...haha Not bad. Some might complain about the length, but I'm not one of those people. Well ...

...Ye've been warned. This song inspired me to write this tale: I find myself in gold, the world lit by fiery torches leaving the smell of a strange incense. I ...

Well, you warned us about the spitting of rage, so I guess I'm not surprised by what I saw...hahaha. Anger seems to touch a lot of people. I used to ...

Angry, defiant, a true 'f--- it' attitude that really shows the pain seeping through. I have seen plenty of pieces like this, and most of them are barnburners. Excellent job ...