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Re: Do you think this would make good book?
Post it in the writing section firstly...You don't post this stuff here in the community sections. This is for discussing the work, not critiquing it. If you want results and ...
Mar 7, 2009 -
Re: The Writer Incognito
I have lots of ideas that are kept secret, mainly because I feel that either they're not ready to be announced, or because they're fairly disturbing and would scare and ...
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Re: An Afterthought
It's like you said bro - I'm only doing this for the fun of it. Rap isn't my thing, exactly. Now that you've reminded me though, I recommend that you ...
Mar 7, 2009 -
Re: Keep it Cool
My apologies for not posting anything else up...I've been way too busy as of late. I'm leaving for Israel tomorrow, and things are going to be nutty for the next ...
Mar 7, 2009 -
Re: Gaea and Frux- Progress Thread
Funny thing, exposure on the internet is. If you type in my name, my high school wrestling record comes up, as well as the records for almost every big wrestling ...
Mar 7, 2009 -
Re: Help?
First, just concentrate on writing it before you worry about what other people think. The actual writing is more important than anything else.
Mar 5, 2009 -
Re: New plans, thoughts, notes, etc.
Dark times and moods have struck again and again lately. I have not written anything for Keep it Cool since two weeks ago. I just can't think, can't even prioritize ...
Mar 5, 2009 -
Re: The touch of a vampire
i dont hate it, i just dont really like it, thats all. and when you "read and critique" something, its impossible to toss all your beliefs aside when you rate ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: The touch of a vampire
yeah man, rating is kinda dumb, but you should definitly rate this thing. VAMPIRES TURN TO DRY BONES IN THE SUNLIGHT PEOPLE. jeez...... yeah, im sorry, i didnt really like ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: Laptops
Have we reached an age where it REALLY matters what kind of laptop or computer you use for writing? Seriously? I don't think it's a big deal. What is a ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: Stairway to Whatever
Written during a night of pure contemplation, regret, and painful reminiscing, I had to let go. I feel like I did so in this hastily scribbled image... I turn, and ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: Untraceable
I'm impressed by your control over the whole scheme and the words in particular. I find that to be the strongpoint of the whole thing right there. I can't really ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: More Lust Then Greed
I pretty much concur with niteowl; it's a great piece, but I think the rhyming needs to go. A lot of people on here seem to think that if it's ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: An Afterthought
Written under the heavy inspirational tunes of the innovational hip-hop warriors Dälek, this is not finished. But I think you'll find it entertaining, and perhaps, thought-provoking. Used to think I ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: Blame
do you want only people who HAVE been cheated on to critique this? I'm only joking of course. Either way you look at it, I suppose I'm qualified. I liked ...
Mar 4, 2009
