Krupp

You should pick a langue, because right now you're a mix of upper-class\irish and modern day english. Chose slang or upper class. ofir What I was kind of going for ...

If you feel like you can stomach it, I'd advise watching Rob Zombie's "The Devil's Rejects" just so that you can see that there are more villains than just the ...

...didn't do a thing for me, except just piss me off. I guess it has negative effects for people who have anger issues...haha.

Clearly, Bloodstainedwhite hasn't heard a song by Agoraphobic Nosebleed haha...not that there is any real need to do so; unless you're into that kind of stuff.. Yet another song with ...

To be honest, this is more prose or even lyrics than it is poetry. It just doens't fit the poetry-vibe. I can understand when anger influences a writing, but that ...

I started a challenge yesterday for my poetry, since I don't write poetry too often, I thought this might sharpen my skills. I listen to one song on repeat every ...

I must admit, that was a lot more intelligent than I expected glancing at the title. At first I was confused as I started out reading, but the poem's kinda ...

This was a decently-done poem. Not bad at all. The rhyming scheme seemed on the first read a little strange, but then I had to remember that I used that ...

Congratulations on finishing it. Wish I could say the same about mine now.

This is why I need to start wearing my contact again...i'm blind without it.

...Why in God's name do you call her 'porn'? ...Or do we not want to know the details?

7.5/10 sexy.

Good luck in transitioning into genres. That's something I'm always happy to do. One genre isn't really enough for me to write everything I'd like to write. Last year, at ...

The books go unread, the drink half-empty. The music up, all the way, blaring ceaselessly as I stare at the screen, still unsure as to what I should say. I’ve ...

This was pretty good. I would suggest capitalizing the 'I' for every line (as the poster above no doubt mentioned) and I would just get rid of the slashes that ...