Krupp

Chapters 2 & 3 are now up. It's about 20 pages in all, now set in Times New Roman font, for anyone who was getting annoyed with Courier.

Hahaha...great ending. I know I'd feel the very same way. Once again, the dialogue fits perfectly, and everything seemed to transition perfectly. This time around, I didn't really see anything ...

Oh, don't be so melodramatic... It doesn't suit you. :P -Pattycakes Ha. It's not so much melodramatic as it is just pure and unchecked frustration. I might be a little ...

That's quite a bit more than morbid; kinda disturbing. But to answer your question, in honesty, if someone was going to die by my hand, it wouldn't really matter what ...

Well, one path you could theoretically try is to have the friend never be persuaded, and end up killing the protagonist, and then roam the earth for a few years ...

I'll get around to this when I can. All I ask is for some patience, as that I'm quite a busy person nowadays...I'll get it back to you asap.

It sounds like it could work. For me to be really effective, I'd need to see it in writing, so get to work on it and post it on here ...

You're welcome. Keep at it.

What I concluded was that there is NO perfect writing formula. Creative or Artistic writing is closer related to music than to an essay. Or at least it should be. ...

Well, about the personal part, there'd be moments where, like the beginning, you're trying to describe something or a character, and instead of just doing so, you'd add in: "I ...

Okay, I'll begin...not quite sure where to start, so I'll go with the dialogue first. Very well-handled for what it is worth. The dialogue propelled the story, which is obviously ...

Yeah man...I'll get to this when I can. I just ask for some patience, as it will take me some time. I'll get back to you when I can.

You do what you want, or what feels like it would complete the story best. There's nothing else that really can be said. It's completely up to you.

Welcome to the club. Have a good one while you're at it.

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