Krupp

Nothing wrong with humor at all. It's just a question of careful timing in most parts; you can't go over the top with the humor. Placing a few quips here ...

If you really wanna avoid all the paperwork crap, think about this; your character is probably not gonna be filling these out by himself. The character's parent will be there, ...

Chapter 3 is ready to be read now. Here it is.

Mickey is the man. Anybody who's seen the Wrestler could tell you that, though. Should've won that academy award over Sean Penn.

I really hope you're talking about the Jonas brothers, and not any of the three bands I just mentioned...

Okay. I just finished now, actually. Interesting concept, and it's actually entertaining to read. There's one main problem here though; you're dancing between present tense and past tense, and it's ...

Compass

I just picked this up today, and I'll see how long it takes me to get back to you with a review. Just have patience, and I'll get it done ...

Dude, this is a great story. Every time I finsh reading a chapter, I find myself laughing at how brilliantly-well Andrew is written. The development here is improving with each ...

It's probably a good thing that the stuff I'm posting on here isn't my best stuff...up until this point everything I've posted is practice for when I'm finally ready to ...

Chad Palma: Man, a dream vacation is leaning back in a plastic chair out on a balcony of a cheap hotel, facing the ocean around evening time. Soothing to look ...

Listen to bands like Boris, Kyuss, or the Melvins if you want real rock music. That's the last time I'll say anything in this thread, I promise.

The more time I spent thinking about it, I tend to sympathize with the character that little is known about. I list simple facts, but mostly let the characters explain ...

Well...once again music has been my inspiration as of late. Thanks to Venetian Snares I'm writing a drug novel for the first time in my life. I usually avoid drugs ...

Once I have a basic idea in my head and the characters that are absolutely necessary to the plot all lined up, I basically improvise from there on out. I ...