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Re: The Wooden Stick Challenge
I think I'd just use it as a walking stick whenever I'm rambling, pretending I'm some traveler with a mission, rather than just a normal guy out for a walk ...
Jul 14, 2009 -
Re: Jonas Brothers
I actually do like their songs. They are good to listen like one a day. Some of them. I hate 'Lovebug'. I like them, but I prefer Linkin Park and ...
Jul 11, 2009 -
Re: Lost Cause
Hi Krupp, Feeling small, weak as dust. I’m falling far, too far for any hopes that something will break my fall. There was no lie created for us that we ...
Jul 7, 2009 -
Re: Lost Cause
Feeling small, weak as dust. I’m falling far, too far for any hopes that something will break my fall. There was no lie created for us that we didn’t already ...
Jul 5, 2009 -
Re: New plans, thoughts, notes, etc.
Good news for a change. Work on the Rosko idea has gone under - no surprise there - and I've decided to do something I've talked about doing for a ...
Jul 4, 2009 -
Re: Getting Over Writer's Block
Thank you for putting this up. I'm confident it's gonna help a ton of people on here.
Jul 3, 2009 -
Re: Michael Jackson is dead
Hopefully his kids will be able to carry on and live their lives without having too much trouble. I'm more concerned for them than anything; I don't feel bad for ...
Jun 29, 2009 -
Re: New plans, thoughts, notes, etc.
This week has been a very, very difficult week for me. I start work tomorrow, and boxing training has been going great so far. But as far as writing has ...
Jun 23, 2009 -
Re: Rate the first sentence above you
8/10 great way to start off, and until you read the entire sentence, you have no idea what's going to happen. Even then, the ending will guarantee interest in the ...
Jun 22, 2009 -
Re: Claustrophobic
Well flow is one of those things where either you nail it or you don't. Sometimes I just don't nail it. Obviously this is one of those times. Thanks for ...
Jun 22, 2009 -
Re: Claustrophobic
....anything specifically needing work?
Jun 22, 2009 -
Re: Claustrophobic
He's in a dance club, being smothered by tons of people on the dance floor. The whole crawling on the floor is metaphorical. The title was one of those times ...
Jun 22, 2009 -
Re: How to determine the beginning
I think everyone has their own way of starting. An important thing I like to keep in mind is that the chronological beginning is not always the 'beginning' of your ...
Jun 22, 2009 -
Re: Claustrophobic
Swing down low, darling, I can’t see you through this crowd. All sucking each other dry, ravaging, Weaving back and forth, and I’m blinded. These lights, staggering me as I ...
Jun 21, 2009 -
Re: Unnamed
Nicely done. The rhyme actually worked, and that's a rarity nowadays. The ending, of course, owns the entire thing, so it's hard for me to really look at the rest ...
Jun 21, 2009
