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Krupp

  • Writing Activities Re: The Wooden Stick Challenge

    I think I'd just use it as a walking stick whenever I'm rambling, pretending I'm some traveler with a mission, rather than just a normal guy out for a walk ...

    Jul 14, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Jonas Brothers

    I actually do like their songs. They are good to listen like one a day. Some of them. I hate 'Lovebug'. I like them, but I prefer Linkin Park and ...

    Jul 11, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Lost Cause

    Hi Krupp, Feeling small, weak as dust. I’m falling far, too far for any hopes that something will break my fall. There was no lie created for us that we ...

    Jul 7, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Lost Cause

    Feeling small, weak as dust. I’m falling far, too far for any hopes that something will break my fall. There was no lie created for us that we didn’t already ...

    Jul 5, 2009
  • Writers Corner Re: New plans, thoughts, notes, etc.

    Good news for a change. Work on the Rosko idea has gone under - no surprise there - and I've decided to do something I've talked about doing for a ...

    Jul 4, 2009
  • Writing Tips Re: Getting Over Writer's Block

    Thank you for putting this up. I'm confident it's gonna help a ton of people on here.

    Jul 3, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Michael Jackson is dead

    Hopefully his kids will be able to carry on and live their lives without having too much trouble. I'm more concerned for them than anything; I don't feel bad for ...

    Jun 29, 2009
  • Writers Corner Re: New plans, thoughts, notes, etc.

    This week has been a very, very difficult week for me. I start work tomorrow, and boxing training has been going great so far. But as far as writing has ...

    Jun 23, 2009
  • Writing Activities Re: Rate the first sentence above you

    8/10 great way to start off, and until you read the entire sentence, you have no idea what's going to happen. Even then, the ending will guarantee interest in the ...

    Jun 22, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Claustrophobic

    Well flow is one of those things where either you nail it or you don't. Sometimes I just don't nail it. Obviously this is one of those times. Thanks for ...

    Jun 22, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Claustrophobic

    ....anything specifically needing work?

    Jun 22, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Claustrophobic

    He's in a dance club, being smothered by tons of people on the dance floor. The whole crawling on the floor is metaphorical. The title was one of those times ...

    Jun 22, 2009
  • Fiction Discussion Re: How to determine the beginning

    I think everyone has their own way of starting. An important thing I like to keep in mind is that the chronological beginning is not always the 'beginning' of your ...

    Jun 22, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Claustrophobic

    Swing down low, darling, I can’t see you through this crowd. All sucking each other dry, ravaging, Weaving back and forth, and I’m blinded. These lights, staggering me as I ...

    Jun 21, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Unnamed

    Nicely done. The rhyme actually worked, and that's a rarity nowadays. The ending, of course, owns the entire thing, so it's hard for me to really look at the rest ...

    Jun 21, 2009


If you can't get out of your comfort zone, you'll never find what you're looking for. Don't make things quick and easy to feel better short term. Make a change and then you'll feel better longer term.
— Frinderman